Oh god, I noticed I was bracing myself while reading this, but then you'd have me laughing. Fantastic descriptions, eerie images. Felt like I was in the bar with David. Congrats.
Good writing. Makes me want to read more. Pulls me along. Especially like the Janet Jackson line and this one is spot on: "To take his shoulders and shake him like a dirty rug."
Oh god, I noticed I was bracing myself while reading this, but then you'd have me laughing. Fantastic descriptions, eerie images. Felt like I was in the bar with David. Congrats.
Love this!
Yep, the intrigue is set! 👏
Good writing. Makes me want to read more. Pulls me along. Especially like the Janet Jackson line and this one is spot on: "To take his shoulders and shake him like a dirty rug."